Correct English, or can it still be improved?

Ma
- in Twitch
5

You get to know so many great people through twitch!

Is this statement purely grammatical and correct in expression?

le

Yes, grammatically is ok

fl

Yes that is fine.

No

Sounds right to me

Ma

Can one expressly beautify that?

fl

Grammatically and the spelling is all very well.

There would be nothing to improve.