Is this text also understandable and error-free?

so
- in Twitch
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I have a text to check here:-).

It would be important that he is faultless.

I also like to accept suggestions for improvement.

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Dear readers,

Is it important to you that the Internet is a place of free expression? If yes, it may interest you that at the end of March the EU adopted a new reform that will limit that. These plans are being promoted by the CDU and SPD, although they opted in the coalition agreement against upload filter.

More than 5 million signatures and over 200,000 demonstrators were simply ignored by the politicians. Since the reform has now been approved, we will have a limited Internet in 2 years. Europe is losing wealth, progress, culture and diversity. Many platforms, including YouTube, have already announced that they will drastically restrict or even close their offerings in Europe. Twitch is already thinking about upload filters.

In the future, these mechanisms will be used by machines to decide what can and should not be seen on the Internet. The technology is very prone to error but the politicians interested less.

People who object to it are insulted as mob and bot. They even accuse the demonstrators of being paid.

The SPD did not prove much more intuition, first one is for it, then against it and now again for it. If one still votes against it in the end in the European Parliament, the CDU was again assisted in a debate over the reform in the Bundestag. CDU and SPD have finally broken their own coalition agreement.

A new copyright on the Internet is a good thing, but the new reform that has now been decided will just make the big business even richer. Small businesses and ordinary citizens are left behind.

Do not support the lobbying and show these politicians the red card! Do not vote for the European elections, not the CDU or SPD. Give the other parties a chance to prove themselves on the political stage!

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If yes, it may interest you that at the end of March…
A new copyright is a good thing, but the new reform that…

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Corrected:

Dear readers,

Is it important to you that the Internet is a place of free expression? If so, you may be interested to hear that a new reform was adopted by the EU at the end of March, which will limit that very thing. These plans are being promoted by the CDU and SPD, although they opted in the coalition agreement against upload filter.

More than 5 million signatures and over 200,000 demonstrators were simply ignored by the politicians. Since the reform has now been approved, we will have a limited Internet in 2 years. Europe is losing wealth, progress, culture and diversity. Many platforms, including YouTube, have already announced that they will drastically restrict or even close their offerings in Europe. Twitch is already thinking about upload filters.

In the future, these mechanisms will be used by machines to decide what can and should not be seen on the Internet. The technology is very prone to error but the politicians interested less.

People who object to it are insulted as mob and bot. The protesters are even accused of being paid.

The SPD did not prove much more intuition, first one is for it, then against it and now again for it. If one still votes against it in the end in the European Parliament, the CDU was again assisted in a debate over the reform in the Bundestag. CDU and SPD have finally broken their own coalition agreement.

A new copyright for the internet is a good thing. But the new reform that has now been decided only makes the big business even richer. Small businesses and ordinary citizens are left behind.

Do not support the lobbying and show these politicians the red card! Do not vote for the European elections, not the CDU or SPD. Give the other parties a chance to prove themselves on the political stage!

We

Dear readers,

Is it important to you that the Internet is a place of free expression? If yes, you may be interested to hear that a new reform was adopted by the EU at the end of March, which will limit that. These plans are being promoted by the CDU and SPD, although they opted in the coalition agreement against upload filter.

More than five million signatures and over 200,000 demonstrators were simply ignored by the politicians. Since the reform has now been approved, we will have a limited Internet in two years. Europe is losing wealth, progress, culture and diversity. Many platforms, including YouTube, have already announced that they will drastically restrict or even close their offerings in Europe. Twitch is already thinking about upload filters.

In the future, these mechanisms will be used by machines to decide what can and should not be seen on the Internet. The fact that the technique is very prone to error, the politicians interested less.

People who object to it are insulted as mob and bot. The protesters are even accused of having been paid.

The SPD has not shown much more tact. First you are for it, then against it and now again for it. If one still votes against it in the end in the European Parliament, the CDU was again assisted in a debate over the reform in the Bundestag. CDU and SPD have finally broken their own coalition agreement.

A new copyright on the Internet is a good thing, but the new reform that has now been adopted only makes big business even richer. Small businesses and ordinary citizens are left behind.

Do not support the lobbying and show these politicians the red card! Do not vote for the European elections, not the CDU or SPD. Give the other parties a chance to prove themselves on the political stage!

My tip: work on that / that

so

Wow you are fast!

so

But it's difficult:-(. Normal I do not write flyers, but thanks for your effort!

But if you write the number "five" or "5" is more a matter of taste, right?

We

So actually you write out the numbers from 1-12, but if you want to draw extra attention, you can certainly write them normally.

Only when essay in school or so that is painted

so

Yes it looks better when I write "5":-), Thanks.

Phew, I'm glad that I get no more notes.