How is the application improvement?

Dear server team,

I would like to apply to them as (Mod). In order to give you an insight into my experience and my personality, I will divide my application into the following points

-1 my person,

-2 experiences,

-3 Why I want to be a moderator?

-4 strengths & weaknesses,

-5 online times,

-6 contact options,

-7 final sentence

My person

My name is Leon, I'm currently 14 years old. I'm going to a secondary school (GKR) in the 8 class. In my free time, I play a lot and am active on the computer. Most of the games I currently play are Minecraft / Fortnite and a few on Playstation by the way. My hobbies and occupations are going jogging, learning for school & sitting on my homework. Of course, I also have a decent spelling right.

experience

I have good experiences in moderation. I was working in smaller, but also middle servers Z. B. Gamerbistro.de which unfortunately no longer exists. I started working on smaller servers at the age of 12, just wanted to help people who had friendly support, so I improved a lot and looked for some successful servers, which I found. I'm sure I would not disappoint any of you and do my job very well.

Why I want to be a moderator?

I think that I'm suitable as a moderator, because I have the necessary courtesy and the necessary helpfulness. I would like to help users who offer friendly and competent support. Support the team and bring new users to the server. Also, I have a degree of mental maturity, which I can prove in the interview.

Strengthen weaken

[+] Courtesy

[+] Patient

[+] Teamwork.

[+] Reliability.

[+] Sense of responsibility.

[-] Poor English knowledge

[-] I'm pretty excited and nervous in job interviews.

Online-Times,

Monday: 15:00 - 23:00

Tuesday: 13:00 - 23:00

Wednesday: 15:00 - 23:00

Thursday: 13:00 - 23:00

Friday: 13:00 - / No specific time

Saturday: 9:00 am - / No specific time

Sunday: 9:00 am - 11:00 pm.

Contact possibilities

Instagram: [removed from support]

Whatsapp: (on request only)

Email: [removed from support]

Forum: Leon

concluding sentence

That was my application as a (moderator), I hope that I could produce you well.

In your strengths you write courtesy… BUT. Since when do you apply the people in an application. That's pretty rude ---

Even if it's just an internet thing

Where do I do that?

To give you an insight into my experience and my personality

That would have to be completely rewritten. The structure does not make you so synonymous. At least not so announced, but just written throughout and in between appropriate paragraphs.

And when exactly do you learn or jog? Is totally unbelievable at your internet times.

Mondays: Did I finish at 14:15 I go home run 1 hour?

14 years and such online times? As a mother you would have no computer in the room.

For that I write good grades 1.7 average?

German will not even be there and math in your Jogging calculation not synonymous.

In the 7th or 8th grade, good grades are not really the problem.

Clear. In German a 2! Math 3 (;

Sorry for the education system.